I think that your design is too basic, this is a flyer or other category? please reply me thank you so much…
sure please tell me
yeah it’s flyer , why do you think this is basic design
thanks for your advice i will try to correct the mistakes. I know the typography very badly. How to learn to choose the rigt font and rules in typography
Yes, you can see for example other flyers approved graphicriver for give idea more better that flyers.
This already approved in graphicriver?
no, I have upload a few days ago
Yet your flyer don’t upload graphicriver because will to be hard rejected until my friend help you best flyer later you can upload graphicriver.
again haRD rejection
Yes. I know
thank you for advices
hi there are a lot of issues as far as what u have here goes …
- global disposition
indeed the disposition looks very random, u have some parts kind of really crammed and some other way more empty and this creates misbalance
indeed, u can of course change the typo a bit if the title is in several parts but u have to think about the way the thing is supposed to be read and to make sure that there is coherence all the same, especially as here , u dio not only have two but three parts and all of them are looking differently , hence the disonnance in terms of style and the disharmony resulting from it , see complementary information in the next point
- typo combinations
sorry to say just this but they are simply not working , there is too much of a difference in terms of style - this makes already very little sense as far as logics goes - but all is emphasized by the variety of styles …
if u put some text people expect them to be readable, especially the most important ones and this is not relay what happens here , friday is not neither imbricating well not been visible or readable
- imbrication of text parts in the title
this is not good enough at the stage , it looks like that u are violating a basic design principle see next point
not the fact that u failed to imbricate things made u indeed come to the point that u failed to align texts in the title properly, but this is not the only basic design that u are violating, see next point
not a good idea to violate it, but u did by bringing some text not contrasting enough with the background so that this is bringing readability and hierarchy issues indeed
- color combinations
they do not look relevant no matter what , black friday, black , ok but why sort of yellow/ gold, white and most importantly blue? the blue comes really out of the blue if i can tell it this way and this is not particularly aesthetic, pls think about complementary colors or shades of the same color, this is safe choices indeed
but I used complenetary colors.
where ? blue and black? lol sorry but i do not see any here as for me …
this is not any better … there are some cool additions, of course, but the main problem keep existing indeed. The matter of colors, are persisting . The main title is not super readable to say the least because of the kind of unaesthetic effect that u put on it. The main bullet is too flat and effects to make it look better are missing. In terms of branding and even marketing i think, this is not coherent as "envato presents " is smaller than all the rest … what do u think that people buying item would be happy to get relegated to third or 4th level level of hierarchy? they would like their names to be noticed and remembered, and rightfully so. Strange way to promote the website too. The shadowing needs much improvement to say the least as this is lacking very often and when there is some, this is misplaced …yoir yellow shape is also taking the breathing away from the foster text. 50 % off is a commercial argument and must prevail, here this is not