Hey guys,
After watching a few nature documentaries, I was inspired to delve into the world of ambient music. This is a my first try, and it’s just a work in progress but I’d like to know what you guys think. Could you see this in say a documentary about ocean life?
Also any mixing tips would be appreciated.
Thanks guys!
https://soundcloud.com/french-records/ambient-inspiration-preview
To be honest I really like it !!!
The only I replaced the drums , but although it sounds good !!! Cool sound !!!
I think the drums are a problem area, and I’m not sure about the lead guitar either - the lead guitar is not popular these days, it sounds more like Pink Floyd when you add the guitar.
The kick drum sounds piercing and irritating, I don’t like where it is sitting. Sounds like it’s just a burst of transient at around 200hz but nothing below.
Yeah maybe I’ll try using a deeper, softer kick. Thanks.
I prefer to create ambient track with more dynamic. If track has slow motion I add some fast percussion (not loud) or synth arrpeggiatos with fast movement.
Unusual and interesting track. I like the idea and the atmosphere. Beautiful. 
But need to work with kick drum.
Thanks guys! Great feedback, I’ll work on it more.
By fast percussion, do you mean like hihats and little snares?
I use shakers, hat, ride.
Cool thanks.
You are welcome! 
Kick is too tiny, make it with some deeper body, and some less click
I agree with previous comments
Yeah, I made the kick small on purpose just to add a little beat. But you guys are right, and after listening to it on different speakers I am now sick of it as well haha. I will work on percussion more.
Thanks for the input!
Updated version, what do you guys think?