Need little help before submission

music
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#1

Hello, I had rejected items before and don’t want to waste neither my time nor reviewer’s… Please give feedback to this -> track <- and tell me will approve it or not? Thanks :slight_smile:


#2

To my mind track idea of track is normal. I think that beat is to loud and firs arrpegiator theme better to do softer. If you want to create cinematic ambient it’s better to do without drums and better to play melodies that you play at synth lead (that sounds like pan flute) at piano. Hope it help you! Good luck!)


#3

Not exactly cinematic ambient I just love strings :slight_smile: I don’t quite understand what you mean about:[quote=“LuckyBlackCat, post:2, topic:94351”]
better to play melodies that you play at synth lead (that sounds like pan flute) at piano.
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Do you mean that if I want cinematic then I need to extend themes at piano and synth? Do more variations? Thanks for feedback


#4

I think the melody at ~0:55 better to play with piano sound)


#5

Hmm it will be more organic :slight_smile: Thanks for idea I’ll think about it)