Hi. @StudioErmine. I will be straight, and maybe is not exactly the answer you were looking for.
The intervals you wrote are counterintuitive, unpleasant, lack of musicality. The execution is mechanical and lifeless . You lack soul and music . It may be a deliberate choice, a touch of musique concrete and some innovative orchestral IDM, Audiojungle is not quite the place for this genre. Let aside the technical issues, you either are playing these with the mouse, or you are using extreme quantization and linear velocity. The second track lacks dynamic expression and dynamic layering. Everything is a maximum level of velocity. The fx are incredibly loud.Anvils, explosions. These are supposed to help the expression of the track, not to subdue it. It may sound harsh, but the reviewer was right rejecting these tracks. Have a good day.