Why this flyer rejected ?

Please tell me why this flyer rejected ?
Thank you

Looks nice. I think the main problem is that no one can read what is written behind the person

this maybe an issue but some people can manage to have look alike items approved all the same … i think that this is not the true reason …

hi i rather like what u have here but the thing is that u have a real issue when it comes to the global organization. Have u ever heard about z-shape reading process? the ting is that the normal way to go through a document in general , flyer included , is to start reading from top left to top right , sweep across the document in a slanted way until bottom left and to finish the process in the right bottom area (al this with a focus point in the center of the page) … this basically means that u have to adapt if u want to follow the logics of eyes … in your case, u have some texts spread a bit everywhere and the organization and hierarchy are not in keeping with this very important reading issue. The positioning of the club name is very much of a very good example, when this something that must prevail in any case … u have this hierarchy and contrast related thing , too, about some text not really popping out because of the color contrasting not enough with the color of the background. The divider also looks a bit strange, this looks as if there was some text with a layer mask on top of it so that this is almost invisible. I do not think also that mixing sizes of text on the same line ia good idea, maybe inverting the positioning ion playlist and club name would be a better idea. I am not sure what the two melted triangle stand for but if this is set of fake logos, i think that u should invest more time to have a really professionally looking logo that takes your game to the next level and if so u would have to rethink the positioning of these logos, too
the cool thing is that u have a nice and tasteful base to start with and that if u manage to handle changes that i told u properly , i think this item could make it :slight_smile:

Thank you very match for your post :slightly_smiling_face:

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u are welcome if u have enough clues to get to know how to bring your game to the next level pls click the “solution” box :slight_smile: