Hello, I just got another rejection, I still have no idea why, I will add that before sending the product I checked it carefully with envato guidelines and with another author’s product, I still have no idea what’s going on, maybe you can help?
@n2n44 Check this and help him.
In my opinion, it’s again your Freaky text. However, your Freaky font doesn’t match. You could use gobold or kenyan coffe. And size should be larger.
hi for me the main reason for the rejection is the global organization and text organization, too … u cannot “butter” texts everywhere u feel like putting them - according to your convenience - if u understand how eyes are working and what the reading process implies … this is what we call z-shape reading … this explain the way eyes sweep across any document in the process of reading. This process is particularly important as this is implying impact zones as well … the problem is , accordingly , that u have no really essential info in the concerned areas … the central text should be in the very center of the canvas indeed, in other words, upper and a bit more over the model’s arms …
besides, about the model. i am not sure that choosing what seems to be a nude model is a very good choice by the way when u know how all platforms, social networks and so on are working. There is also an issue when it comes to the club name, the size of this text is not adequate according to its very importance for branding matters. The positioning is also widespread, though this is not really right when it comes to making sense (i explained this with the z-shape reading process …).
Thank you for a very comprehensive answer, I will analyze everything and apply it in the next project, best regards.
this is up to u but as for i could witness all the people who say just this end up posting here again after doing exactly the same mistakes , but this is up to u , i just share experience … good work and good luck (if u have enough clues about what to do pls check the solution box)