Anyone please explain why they rejected this flyer. Thanks
Hi There: You have a typography problem that needs improvements for approved gr and alignments (hierarchy) also… good luck regards.
no , no typo issue in my view, apart maybe from using too many fonts, maybe … (this is not necessarily a problem for all the people) and this is still left to be determined. Mentioning about alignment is not superfluous but if u do not explain , this does not really mean anything, as there is only one set of elements are that are failing to align properly …
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hi, for me this looks professional and nice overall. I think that the pink texts in the mid section of the flyer are deteriorating your work a bit as I assume that u should only keep two and one on the left and one on the right and mirror / align them with one another. I would suggest to turn the gradient inside of it a bit more like pastel color in an attempt that this is springing out more and that these text elements turn more readable in the process, too. As for I see it, u should bring up"performance by" a bit up so that this is not goin over the name and making it not as readable , as this is an important element indeed. Otherwise I fail to understand what “club” on the left side of the footer stands for as u already have the name of the club in the middle. Not to mention that the one in the middle is much much more adaptable user needs , as , if the club name is long , there is far more space to write it down. As a detail, I am not sure that the necklace thing on both sideways is really indispensable ,I would rather put something a bit more associated with celebration instead. Finally , I think that u could can improve the spacing in the central part of the footer by having the club name placed in a more balanced way vertically , simply by dragging it in the middle of “Alex and rosey” and the address
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