Why this business card was rejected?

hi indeed, for me this is mainly an issue of typo and font pairing being a bit too flat or not original enough. Then, i guess that this is not really matching your theme too, i tend to believe that this style would probably be more appropriate for a photographer business card.In addition, as for me, i think that not fulfilling the shapes in the logo side (just like u have been doing for the other side) makes the card look a bit strange and “unbalanced” as the same style is not follow from one side to the other. Finally, i think that globally if the card is far from being the worst one ever since, but this is not good enough yet graphically and originality wise so that u need to bring an extra touch of work and creativity to make it get to the next level indeed