My Business Card has been rejected. But Why any Guess?

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#1

Thank you for your submission. We have completed our review of “Modern Business Card” and unfortunately we found it isn’t at the quality standard required to move forward, and you won’t be able to re-submit this item again.

We appreciate the effort and time you’ve put into creating your item. And we’d be happy to help make sure your next entry will meet our submission requirements. Here’s our advice:


#2

hi indeed, the typo is a too flat at this stage (lacking creativity and font combinations), plus for me the use of italic i completely outdated and everything but aesthetic. PLus, u need to introduce a fake logo and make sure this is a quality one so that it does not destroy the preview, what u have right now is not “selling”, pls keep in mind that every detail matters indeed
your icons are basically too common. Finally the style of your card is a bit generical but is not necessarily compatible with a lot of usual corporate needs in my view , because of the sort of “abstract” side of your design


#3

My recent two Business Card got Hard Rejection


#4

hi as for me i prefer the first one in spite of acknowledging that the second one’s style is more original , the thing that u can be told about the first one is that there are a whole lot of cards in the same style, colors and so on, plus the typo is slightly flat too, you do not have any combination and nothing is popping out this much

for the second one, there is some harmony in the tasteful choice of colors and about the way the thing looks in a general way, this is tastefully done and organized but i am not so sure that the style , background and so on really match with teh theme. PLus your typo is globally flat , this is somehow someway lacking originality and combinations once again. finally icons look flat or simple in my view


#5

Thank n2n44 ,

Recently I have tried new and improved version of Business Card that too has been H.rejected .

Sample attached.