My logo is rejected. Anyone please suggest me what is my mistake.
if u asking for critics and/or advice u should include the screenshoot of ur work here on your post, we are not psychic bro.
Sorry, the logo is added.
hi indeed everything is too “raw” and definitely outdated in terms of style … nowadays , most of the logos are made of pathfinder action , with some shapes being withdrawn from others … at this stage , with your item, everything looks like pasted right next to the other element … in addition, the typo is globally really too flat , lacking originality , combinations, not to mention that the illustration and the texts are sort of not imbricating, as they are not well positioned so that it creates harmony … the colors are also disconnecting g the two parts as yellow is nowhere to be seen apart from the illustration and sane goes with the black color in the other side … the kerning is wrong , too , there is too much space between letters, this looks not good, especially as the caps are increasing the disbalance …
Thank you so much.
u are welcome … if u feel like u have solutions enough u can check the “solution” box …