hi difficult to believe that it could have been any other way buddy, sorry to say just this … but indeed, there is much to say and much to improve …
1- concept
indeed, the concept is not really obvious , hard to identify exactly what is the meaning of the logo, in my view
2- color combinations
sorry to say just this but colors are not really attractive or convincing, kind of too flashy, especially as re gard to the supposed theme …
3- lack of harmony
at this stage with what u have here this looks like that texts and illustration have been pasted right next to each other with there is anything in common, any harmony indeed
4- typo
the typo is lacking originality and combinations in my opinion and typo is much of an issue here indeed, probably the most important of all …
5- lack of imbrication
texts and illustration is not combining well … there is an issue of positioning indeed
6- global style
well in the end , u do not have so much graphic design inside this one and the style in not a really trendy one actually …
7- commercial potential
this is a bit low about this as what u have here can be redone rather quickly by anyone knowing how to use illustrator …
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You will farewell Envato site and work in other 
what are u talking about buddy?
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Lol, that’s the wrong sentence to say thank u, bro
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soooooooooooooooory >> i will farewell Envato site and work in other
If you don’t get approved here and you abandon that easy it means you cannot understand this business. Good luck in your life.