What is wrong?
Don’t be sorry for rejection after you spend few minutes o this one. The ideea has potential but the outcome looks like done in hurry.
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hi for me there are different issues though this is not bad in a general way … there is a true attempt for originality and this is positive but maybe this is a little too “line-oriented” and not completely in nowadays trends indeed where most of the logos are made out of substracting shapes from others with the pathfinder … plus, the color combination is not working and creating a feeling of things being pasted right next to each other without being really connected indeed … the typo part is definitely too flat, lacking originality , combinations and / or variations so that the name part is more punchy and the item gets more original too
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thank you for your answer…