Please HELP mE
hi u are really miles away from the standards required here right now, sorry to say just this , but this is how i feel, no offense, ok?
1- global style
the global style is kind of flat , this is lacking graphic design in a general way …
2- marketability
this point is related to the first one … think about it, at this stage why would anybody buy something that they could redo very quickly … and thus why a reviewer would approve an item that is very likely not to be convincing enough so that buyers buy it?
3- titles
a title is something central that MUST be outstanding … here this is almost lost on the sideway …this is not even contrasting from the background
4- colors
sorry but some color variations are not working well and displaying them are not helping they are just burying your item alive … you need to introduce things that make the preview look good and make people want to accept the item and after that come and buy it …
5- texts and readability
many texts are there but almost cannot be read … why is discount lost this way , almost so very unreadable?! this is supposed to be an important information to be valued for the potential buyer to get to buy the food …
6- fake logo
this is too flat it does not look realistic and “people cannot buy it” …
7-icons
icons are too flat and insignificant , they are hardly see also and finally they are not in the same “boldness” …