hi Jeri. Your work is still too simple at this stage. This takes very little time for someone with minimum graphic design skills to redo it, so that the commercial value of the item definitely decreases, not to mention that I assume this is probably not that difficult to find such items for free download, so, right now, why would anybody pay for it ? Some texts are really difficult to read due to size , color and lack of contrast between text color and background color, which impacts the whole work as far as readability, impact and hierarchy goes. Besides, still about hierarchy this is hard to understand why a part of a time is different color than another and the color difference gives different impact to the diverse parts in the meanwhile. As an example, “healthcare” is far less visible than “the best” and “services” which is not really making sense. And this goes on and on. Pls keep in mind that corporate items are supposed to be well arranged all the way, be flawless in terms of respecting basic design principles and graphic logics indeed, so that they are ultimately efficient and in keeping with buyers expectations … To further comment about the style issue, otherwise, look, if u take out all the vignettes, all u have left at this stage is plain gradient shapes, rounded squares , texts and triangles, which is rather light …
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Thank you so much… 
I try make other design brochure trifold… I am learning design it…