Hello,
My track has been rejected, I would appreciate your comments. Thanks.
Hello!
The music is very lively. I really like the moment from 1:54-end. Nice to listen to that 
I can not even say why they did not accept your music.
I could be wrong, but at 0:02 the piano does not sound very good, flat, loud… The piano mutes other synthesizers. There is a lot of echo left from the piano and the ears get a little tired of it. And the composition itself sounds quiet. I just want to make the music a little louder(compression).
IMHO!
You’re doing fine! GOOD LUCK! 
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Everything sounds too synthetic. The mix is also bad.
@Ksarex Thank you Ksarex for your kind contribution and constructive help!
Thanks for the comment.
Hi,
(I’ve had lots of rejections and one recent acceptance, so don’t take my opinion too seriously, but…) Production sounds okay to me, I just think the melody could tell a bit more of a story - it doesn’t have to follow the background parts so closely.
Best of luck with your music!
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@rossmccrae Thank you for the helpful comment. You just pointed out what I tried to avoid - too much melody (I feared it will be too distractive for a video background). Your “Waffles on Toast” is beautiful, congrats! It reminds me of “Love Our Time Today” (from “Death at Funeral”).
@Fabertone Many thanks!