Hi all,
this is my last track rejected, can you help me please to understand why?
https://soundcloud.com/florbo73/first-time-preview
Thanks so much! 
Hi there - the piano melody sticks out too far and needs to be glued together within the overall mix using levels and some reasonable use of compression. Also think about an ending rather than just stopping. IMHO.
Hi gbalix, thanks for your advices, very kind!
If I understood, the piano melody starts too far in your opinion? I agree with you about the ending, it’s too abrupt maybe…
Thanks again!