Hard rejection. Need your opinion

Hello, guys!
My track was hard-rejected.
Will be glad to hear feedback from you.

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The track sounds awesome to me and the composition is awesome too. My two cents: to be on the look out for the synth that explodes on the foreground around the minute mark of the track.
To me it seems to be on the same page as the percussion but creates a certain unpleasant distorsion with it. I would lower the volume of that sound throughout the whole track. I understand it creates a subdivision that gives the track its fast pace. But I would replace that with arpeggiating violins playing 16th notes up and down. And leave this sound on the background.

That’s my take on it. Just a rookie trying to figure out rejections. But perhaps it gives some new perspective on it.

Cheers!

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I think that only the one problem of rejection this track - weak piano melody(and this melody is the core of your trailer). Everything else is fine. I think - it’s a pretty good composition.
My advice to you for better melody - use midi keyboard(for more natural sound), try to develop your melody with a different motifs; make it logical, interesting and expressive! Try to find some videos about melody writing on youtube! Good luck!

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Thank you, guys, for your responding😉 I appreciate it a lot.

I am new but I hope you accept my 2 cents. The composition is absolutely brilliant and so are the sounds, but as Turpak said maybe the piano at the beginning needs a bit of strength. Also I think that maybe the track is clipping, and there is too much low end which “eats” the power of the rest of the music. Really brilliant anyway, I wish I could make something like this.

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thank you for the answer.
I hope you’ll be able to create even better tracks soon. :wink: