Track Rejected - looking for feedback/advice

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#1

Hi everyone. I recently had a track hard rejected, and am looking for some feedback/advice as to possible reasons why, and how it could be improved. Link here: https://soundcloud.com/floor7sounds/bright-uplifting-corporate/s-yvxnB

Thanks as ever!
Best
Jon


#2

Hi @Floor7Sounds
Nice track! I think it needs some variety in chords progressions and more fresh sounds. Some instruments are too midi-like. Though good work! Good luck! :blush:


#3

The 4th chord is really a little unexpected. Also strings and the whole sound a little outdated.


#4

Hi, the track itself is good, but very monotonous chords, synth (solo) on 4 chord false note .


#5

Thanks everyone, much appreciated. I listen to my stuff over and over when recording/mixing etc, and sometimes miss obvious details. I can hear how the 4th chord sounds awkward. Thanks for the suggestions.