Track rejected. Would appreciate some feedback!


I have joined AJ only recently and my first track was hard rejected. Not really sure if it’s the arrangement, or the mix, or both, so any feedback on this would be greatly appreciated!


The rejection causes in my opinion:

  • dissonant chord progressions (for example at 0:12-0:14)
  • panning bass
  • weak percussion
  • too many melody instruments (the electronic organ starting at 0:48 seems to be out of context)
  • flat arrangement with no distinctive parts (except for the outro)

These are just my thoughts. The idea and the sounds are nice btw!


Thanks a lot for taking the time!