My first track - what do I need to improve (Hard rejected)

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#1

Hey, I put in some tracks and I have just got my first hard rejection. I know I can’t submit it again, but I want to know what areas I need to change next time. Many thanks for any constructive criticism.
Here is the track:


#2

Anyone?


#3

If I was commenting on this solely as a piece of music, and not as a track for AudioJungle, I’d say there are some nice creative ideas, but the sound is rather muddy and the unusual rhythmic noises eventually become a bit annoying and very repetitive.

However, it’s really not a style of music that’s likely to be useful to buyers on AJ. I’d suggest having a listen to tracks that get accepted in styles that you feel comfortable doing and take these as a pointer for what might get accepted.


#4

Thanks for your feedback!