Hey Everyone - so this track was hard-rejected, but I think it still has potential. I’m hoping to make some changes and resubmit, so I’d love to hear your thoughts.
I’m thinking I will get rid of the intro and begin the track right at 0:19. I also think i’ll need to change the genre from corporate (not sure what i was thinking) to something else (maybe electronica?).
What genre would you call this? Any other changes/comments? Thanks in advance!
Very exotic (not the usual track). they do not like new ideas. better ten on each other similar tracks will take. and the sound too seems to need to face in depth and in stereo.
I love this idea)
But mixing is VERY BAD!!!
It’s main reason of reject, in my opinion)
Sounds like in mono
But the track is very good!
Try to mix it!
Use more reverb, delay and other plugins of room!
Pan for instruments!
And track will be approved if it will be sound better)
I don’t like the sound that happens at 0:05 and then every so often throughout the song. Sounds like some kind of digital seagull barking in my ear. Apart from that, it’s pretty good!
Hey,
The track is a cool idea, but as others have said, the mixing is not that good and even though the track is not your usual Audiojungle track, i think that may have been the main reason for rejection.
Thanks everyone for your replies. Looks like I need to go back and do some re-mixing before I submit. Thanks again!