Rejected for the second time don't know what to do :'(

Envato Authors AudioJungle
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Hi guys,
My track was rejected for the second time, can you please listen and tell me how to improve it again?
It’s very frustrating they don’t tell you why…

Thank you!

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Hi friend, I listened to your track, I found it confusing, many instruments making melody, I think you should separate this well, mix better. decide which instrument will do the melody, and let it appear. this is just my opinion right? You can improve this track.

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I agree with this. Needs a bit of improvement, nonetheless, you’re on the right track.

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Maybe a few too many arpeggios in some sections and like the others said a bit busy at times.

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Thank you guys, I think I’ll delete some useless track and take more time on the mix.
I’ll make you listen before upload.

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Yes, upload the track here before shipping, we will try to help. :relaxed::relaxed::relaxed:

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Hi guys!
This is my new version

Any suggestions to improve it?

Thank you again for your replies :wink:

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Piano arpeggio is too loud. You could just mute the piano and leave the guitar with the strings.

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Yes I wanted to make it the main instrument. Yes maybe it’s too loud, but I don’t think I’ll mute it. Thank you

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Hi! What about this one? :slight_smile:

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I’m not a pro, and I’ve had tracks rejected too. More rejected than accepted actually. So I have also been left questioning why. I thought the beginning was excellent. The piano and guitar part were really good, and could certainly hear it in a commercial. It has that commercial feel to it. Where I think it lost that quality is with the strings and woodwinds. To me, the samples just dont live up to the rest of the stuff going on, and I think they bring the quality down. Audio Jungle will reject music if they think the samples aren’t good quality.

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Thanks dude for your reply ! I uploaded this one, if it’s rejected I will give up with woodwinds and strings.