Rejected 5 Times, Please help.

Hello, This is the 5th time AJ have rejected my tracks but i had high hopes for this one. I thought the mix was good and the composition felt good too. Can anyone please give feedback on this track, is it the mix? or the composition? or both?

Thanks guys.

I think this is not type of “Stock” song.

This sounds more like a backing track. The chord sequence is fine, but it needs a strong melody.

Hello! The first thing that catches your eye is a weak rhythm block. I would do something more impressive to be for such a good track idea.
Also mixing track is not the best. The Fill Breaks are very loud.

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