Please help me to figure out the reason of reject my template. I really worked hard on it.
link demo
thanks for your help.
I can only see it on mobile but with respect this is nowhere near the standard.
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the one page concept is over saturated without something uniquely distinctive and pixel perfect in design
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the typography and font choices are really not good
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the design is quite outdated and the bold red colour is really hard to get right
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there’s inconsistent spacing and margins eg on the services
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it’s a long way from mobile optimise eg counter abs portfolio
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the portfolio images all look stretched and the lightbox versions are tiny
Yes , you are right,Thanks a lot for helping.
I’ve edit the whole template based on your notes and standards.
Kindly, have another look, and tell me what’s your opinion for now.
Thanks very much.
@charlie4282
I don’t personally see a difference (and have cleared cache etc.) but either way the concept alone is too far from the standards - you cannot fix these things in less than 24 hours.
People won’t be able to give you a list of fixes - you need to understand the reason for necessary changes and how they need to roll out across the whole design
These are pointers but again it’s not a list of fixes it’s theory that needs to be understood and deployed professionally. https://redpen.io/dke22e1a4108ba4a23
i’m so sorry , i was working for all last 24 hours ,
so i forgot to include the new link (it always happens to me 
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i can now figure out what excatly you mean, the screenshot is quite different from the liveview.
anyway i’ve made a lot of change.
the new link : https://aero-v2.netlify.com
and a similar screenshot :
Thanks again for your time , and i’m waiting for your reply.
@charlie4282
It’s better but still a long way off the standard and several of exactly the same issues as before
Thanks @JeriTeam , i’ll check all of them.
Ok. charlie4282, i’ll try to do my best.
Thanks one more time for your interest.
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