Hi everyone, this my second item and got rejected by graphicriver. I always research before I start making a template, but a bit stress when my design always got rejected. I am very appreciate if you give me some advice, critque and guide for how to get accepted. Thank you for your help!
Here’s my design.
You have issues on almost every aspects: weak concept, typography, hierarchy, spacing and alignments, composition, coherence, outdated design
Hi. Thank you for your feedback. How do you spot this design is outdated. It will help me to make a decision when make a new design.
Thanks
Everyone can place text near pictures in Powerpoint. You need do be more creative.
hi as for me the biggest problem that i see here is one related t the guideline, as i cannot really find one, most of the time is in red and black, then u have some black and white, some touches of colors here and there without we can identify why. I guess the most dissonant part is with the green looking slide, which appears completely disconnected, dissonant and thus pasted there without a vision or putting sufficient attention. Some execution or coherence problems can be noted as well, as when u make the text follow the triangle, without this is really following it completely, as the block remains a block and u did not use the pen tool and selection to make the text adapt to the shape indeed. Globally the hierarchy is also super flat, well very much due to a very flat and tasteless typo part , too. The fact of the matter is that it would take u to bring more relief down there , by adding more colors- relevant ones - more variations, more font combos and some touches of originality. This type of item requires much effort as far as typo goes, mean even more than usual. This is already a main focus here , no matter where u are posting but the issue is even more critical with this type of item using a lot of stock pictures that cannot be part of the main file that people will download indeed. It also seems to me that there is a cacophony when it comes to titles as there seems to be different colors sometimes, different sizes without we can identify why. There also some problems regarding white space and the way the page / canvas is being organized
alright, thank you for your advice
Hi, thank you for this valued info and advice. very appreciated. I will learn more for those things.
u are welcome, good work and good luck 
hi, finally i got new template accepted. thank you for all. much appreciated
happy for u , good luck with sales
Thank you, good luck for you then.
