I also hear syncopation issues. In it’s current state it will most likely not get approved. The strings at 1:30 also don’t seem to fit very well.
It’s a good idea though. With some work I think it could be accepted.
I also hear syncopation issues. In it’s current state it will most likely not get approved. The strings at 1:30 also don’t seem to fit very well.
It’s a good idea though. With some work I think it could be accepted.