Greetings family. So far I have had one my songs approved for sale. I am in the process of submitting another but I would love it if someone could give me feedback before I submit it so that I have a higher chance of it getting approved.
Anyone can help me out?
Here is the link.
Where can we listen to your work?
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Kevin Richelieu
Pastor | Author | Producer
Did you get a chance to listen yet?
No, unfortunately the link doesn’t work for me.
Try this:
Okay, let’s take it in order:
1 - The track is very monotonous, it’s better to make a loop of about 30 seconds.
2 - I would use mute guitar as the main melody
3 - very few low frequencies.
In general, the piano chords sound fine, but the melody seems to sound very cheap.
I would also change the percussion.
Use more professional libraries and VST
When you say the melody sound cheap what do you mean?
Also, I’m using professional VSTs for the shaker. Is there a shaker library you think fits better?
Hope all is well. When you have a chance please let me know your thoughts about my last message. I want to make sure I do my diligence before submitting so I have a better chance of landing this one.
Have you changed anything in the track now?
I have not yet because I was waiting for you to reply to my last question. I really do not want this track to get rejected if there is something that can be done that gives me a better chance of it getting approved.
