Need help with rejected track


#1

Hi, everyone!
This is one of my latest rejected tracks. And I have no idea what’s wrong with it. Need your advice.
Thanks for your opinion.
https://soundcloud.com/andrew-sinitsin/sunlight


#2

I think the main problem of this track is quality of samples and mixing. Try to create more dynamic and live sound. Good luck!


#3

Thank you. I tried to improve the quality of the mix and sound design with each new track. It seems still not at the required level of quality.


#4

any other opinions?