Need feedback before submission

Hello guys, I need your opinion about this track

Sunny Day

Is this ready for submission?

dry. quacking sound in the background it is sometimes necessary to interrupt and cut off the top frequency. to expand the stereo base. pad 400-800 Hz are also needed. it’s for my taste.

Hey, you will also have to change most of the instruments you used. They are not sounding well and make your song sounding cheap.

Thanks, I will try to improve the quality :slight_smile: