My track was rejected, please help.

Hi guys. I’d love to hear your opinion on what you think might be wrong on this jingle.
Thank you for any tips!

In my opinion the track sounds unfinished. It misses a strong melody, something that tells an interesting story.

Good luck with your next uploads!

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Thank you! I’ll try to work on it.

0:48 - I expected an explosive continuation of music :sweat_smile:
Good job. I can’t say anything bad about the quality of music.
But it ends quickly. You should develop it :thinking:
Good Luck!

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Thanks! I will try it.

Altough it sounds beautiful to me, the track looks like a 1:00 minute intro that you keep expecting to develop into something more!
But good job it has lots of potential in my opinion

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Thank you very much!