First track is Hard-rejected. I need your help

Hello everyone. I’ve submitted my first track on AudioJungle, it was hard-rejected and I need you to help me understand what is wrong with it. I am new to this platform and would really appreciate it if you could give me some constructive criticism about composition and technical side of the track. Thank you for attention.

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I think the piano sounds too loud causing a little bit distorted to me and the strings ensemble sounds inorganic. As for the composition, sometimes it is always a good idea to have a little breath on composition to add some dynamic so that it won’t fatigue our ears quickly. also make sure you decide who will be the lead instrument and make sure that your song’s structure has to tell each stories.
It’s just my opinion. Other people have better opinion, good luck!

Thank you for your helpful opinion! I will take this into account in future works.