My track is rejected

Hi guys!

My song was rejected. Can you help me with your opinions?

It was rejected with next message:
This submission does not meet our general commercial composition/arrangement standard, unfortunately.

Thank you very much!

https://soundcloud.com/timtaj/island-tropical/s-48Ifu

Hey Tim! Take this with a grain of salt, as I donā€™t want to speak for the reviewers, but here are my brief thoughts.

This track sounds like a toned down EDM/trance song. Though it sounds fine in terms of production and mixing, I think itā€™s simply not a great fit for a stock music site, at least one like AJ.

I just said this recently to another artist, but I think it applies here as well. Basically, where does this track fit in? Itā€™s not really upbeat enough to be an energetic romper, but itā€™s too aggressive to be your typical understated corporate motivator. What would be the use for such a track? Iā€™m not saying there isnā€™t one, simply that it is a fairly niche market and not an ā€˜AJ trackā€™.

Honestly, I donā€™t think thereā€™s too many technical issues here. Overall the composition works as what it is, but it just doesnā€™t really fit with the typical idea of ā€˜stock musicā€™.

Anyways let me know if you want something clarified or if you wanted some more in-depth thoughts, I just woke up so am a little hazy. Good luck with future tracks!

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Dear SethKL! Thank you for your opinion.

This music I downloaded into the category of ā€œWorld Beat / Island tropicalā€.
I thought, and decided that this track suits most as ā€œpopā€. I again worked on quality, put some deficiencies and sent again to the category of ā€œpopā€ I hope this time will be.

Thank you!