My item was rejecteed, can anyone help me with feedback? It will help a lot!

Hello everyone! Can you give me some feedback on this track? i realy want to improve my next works.Is it too repetitive?
Thank you

Good morning,

Great job!

It is a little on the repetitive side, but certainly not bad in terms of composition. You might just want to break it up with an occasional B section.

The main thing however is the space doesn’t sound right, try adding some reverb to polish it up!

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Hello,
Thank you for feedback and pleasant words, it motivates me a lot!
I wiil try some B section for it.
It is very strange, but i really forgot about reverberation. I keep it in mind in next my works.
Thanks again for helping me.