It's my second work and second hard reject.
And if at first time i cleary understand what's wrong with my track,
now i have some idea what's wrong, but don't shure. Can you give me a feedback, please?
I think the main issue is that there are 32,336 happy ukulele tracks already on AudioJungle. Itâs hard to get this stuff past review nowadays. I donât think your track is too bad, but it doesnât really offer anything new.
In terms of improving the track, Iâd say the melody is a little bit cheesy, but thatâs not always a deal-breaker. The sounds youâve used are a bit dated, like the whistle/marimba combo. Itâs reminiscent of Nintendo video game music from the late 90âs. People whoâve played Diddy Kong Racing on the Nintendo 64 will know what I mean. Thatâs not altogether the worst thing in the world though, as Iâm pretty sure N64 era video games will soon be trending again as all the mid-30 year olds start to suffer from nostalgia!
As far as your track goes though, I think itâs supposed to sound organic, but it sounds like a midi sequence.
Also, it seems that youâve used âthatâ âhey!â sample. Itâs everywhere, and spreading. I donât know where it comes from, but as soon as I hear it in a tune, my forehead meets my hand. Find a vocal pack that has a variety and not just a single one-shot, or record your own 'heyâs but please, just delete that one from your sample library!
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Thanks for your feedback! It will be very usefull for me!
it was my own âheyâ) and now Iâm a little ashamed of it)
a lot of experience needed to do these kinds of genre, it needs all skills like : mixing - mastering, composition, arrangement, musicality , its not that easy, and as @criskcracker said, its hard to pass review with these if your track is not amazing!