hi firts of all u have a technical issue as u are not supposed to included the model …apart from this , this is not a “magazine template” that u have here but the template of a magazine cover , which is completely different, as u have only one page in the zip file … in addition , according to me , your cover is a bit too monolithic … there is nothing really popping out in the end , this is the same color everywhere, u do not have graphic elements at all but red texts. It seems to me that u could by the way find more harmonious typo combinations again and the whole thing in a general way is a bit too flat, too rough or too raw. Do not get me wrong i do not mean that this is really not good all teh way but the fact of the matter is that u have a lot of things lacking at this stage all the same, hopefully, with a bit more effort u can make it reach the next level and have it approved 