Hi everyone,
I was just looking for some feedback on this item that was rejected.
Thanks for your help!
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With respect, the concept is not new and the typography is not good
hi as for me I think that even if the logo is rather clean, this looks rather outdated, too, on the other hand … most of modern logos use much the pathfinder and so on , u do not really have this , there is form of a global retro feeling resulting from what u have at this stage and the rather retro style turns even more “outdated” , once considering the typo part indeed. Otherwise, the tagline is lacking and I am not sure how it goes if the logo “gets horizontal” as , as for I know, it seems required to add an horizontal version too … I am particularly not sure how the thing goes when it comes to imbricating both parts - illustration and text - if u have to create a horizontal version
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