hi sorry to say just that but this is clearly not surprising that it was rejected indeed …
here are a collection of reasons why …
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global style
this is clearly a rather outdate style based much on drawing when nowadays this is more about abstract things or intersection of shapes indeed … -
typo
please no offense but the thing is horrible font wise … not only does the typo look old but it looks also very distorted and as if this was not enough , in addition, the combination is clearly not working … -
readability
if the color change was an attempt to match with the illustration and it was good about this , the problem is that u end up with something that is lacking contrast and this very hard to read -
global concept
sorry to say just this buddy but what is the circle behind? because it if is supposed to be a bowl, well , te fishes are outside … i guess they would be better off inside lol at least if they want to survive lol -
choice of colors
the color for fish eyes looks strange if u ask me … -
details
u have too many details … think about it , here they consider the logo in a (very)small size and too many details this is thus not working …
hahahaha…thanks for your nice comment. I did lot of experiments over one logo… Please gimmi me some logo design tips so that I can improve my design. thanks again for spending your valuable time to review my logo
LOL the previous message is full of tips buddy , i am trying to help u to get to know what to do but i cannot do it for u lol kidding anyway , pay attention to what i told u and i think that u will take your game to the next level …
if u feel like u have enough tips to improve, u can check the “solution” box , good luck and good work buddy 