With respect, this work is already more similar, but it’s still not a logo, too rich in detail, in a small resolution it will look blurry. Your logo should also be easily customizable and I think the font doesn’t look very interesting. The structure did not appear and the effect on the right, which I think is not appropriate in the chosen text and logo layout. You have a long way to go, but don’t give up. I still recommend that you review the latest approved works on GR or find inspiring works to provide the best idea for the market. You will also have to try harder in the demo version of your logo. Again, this category is very rich and your item will not be able to compete in this form.
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hi pls see my comment on your other logo, all the things i said are definitely possible to be applied to this “logo” too …