Thank you @ARCHIMUSIC !!
I think piano sounds good
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@SixideBeats ,@ARCHIMUSIC, @Phreaspirit, @ScorpionProduction, @gurucodec Hi guys!!
I loaded piano song and was rejected!
I tried to add strings!
Do you think is better?(sorry for my english)
I think this version is much better and strings are good. Maybe the problem is that at the end of the track some piano chords are too agressive (loud). I guess it may be a good idea to make those accents a little softer.
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very beautiful, I like it !!! But I advise you to make a full and complete end of the track. Read here:
Sounds good to me! But why did you pan the strings all the way to the left? Itâs a bit strange. Iâd give them some more space.
You havenât submitted this one yet, if I understand correctly, right?
I agree with @ARCHIMUSIC that the end should be a well defined closing chord (not too long though), it would be much more Audio Jungle-ish. 
Cheers!
I agree with SixideBeats about the pan string to the left, I listened with headphones sound a bit uncomfortable. You can do this: put a string in the middle belt and expand on the panorama, or duplicate strings in the right but with a different tone, or in a differenthttps register. Check the location of the strings in the orchestra.
Thank you guys!
What can I do to end the song?
@SixideBeats @SixideBeats
That end is approximately in this composition. Can be used as a reference track, but use your own melody and harmony.
No ,@SixideBeats , I donât upload this track yet!!
Thank you @ARCHIMUSIC !!
Appreciate it !!
Get rid of those four sequential up-rolling piano notes at 0:44 and just let the chord ring out.
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@SixideBeats @ARCHIMUSIC @Phreaspirit @ScorpionProduction
It is better now?
https://soundcloud.com/user-610745791/ps-1
Yes, I think the composition, arrangement and mix is really good now. The only thing is that the strings could sound more airy, or realistic if you like. Is it a solo violin or some string section? Sometimes it sounds like only one instrument, but at other notes Iâm not so sure.
But in general itâs more sellable now I think.
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Overall, its good! I just didnt like the ending this time. I get the idea thoughâŚSomething is wrong with timing thereâŚOr, i would simply end it with soft final chord at 0:44 and thatâs it)
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It is solo violin and string section .
Just going to throw in some feedback here.
Overall, I think the arrangement would benefit from removing the strings entirely. For example, the string parts are too quiet and therefor do not add much to the composition right now,if you wish to keep them consider bringing up the levels a bit.
The solo violin is also playing quite low in its range resulting in a scratchy and dark sound, which, is a considerable contrast to the overall elegance of the piano part. If you do indeed wish to keep the solo instrument, bring the solo violin higher in its playable range (C4-B5) itâll be much brighter this way.
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I appreciate it !!
Thank you for comment !!
One last thing. You better do the way you feel. You always get something like âtweak thisâ or âtweak thatâ. But you better do what you feel. Thats it. Just do your thing
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