They wrote that: “we found it isn’t at the quality standard required”. Can you help me please what standards should be there? Will you show me one example?
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I uploaded my photos can you give me some advice about it.
I’m not the right person to judge design work @n2n44 or @XioxGraphix or @DesignSomething would be better
You have allot of issues in this flyer.
- Typography | The cursive font doesn’t pair well with the sans serif that you use.
- Visibility | Friday isn’t visible.
- Hierarchy | You need to emphases the typo based on importance. The font that you use for secondary info is too thin and it’s nearly invisible.
- Model | Your model is poorly isolated and it is not integrated with the rest of elements. Also the image is low res.
- Effects | Lens flares looks amateurish
- Overall look and feel is too raw.
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hi i see a collection of things to fix, improve or modify here so that u can take your game to the next level indeed … lets get started
1- contrast
indeed, u are expecting to bring something to the table offering as high a contrast as possible in a general way and especially when it comes to titles and important information , the problem is that right now this is rather the other way around i would not go as far as saying that u are violating this basic design principle , as this would be an overstatement but indeed, the bottom line is that what u have to offer could really be way better about it, actually …
2- hierarchy
there should be very distinguished levels of reading between at least primary and secondary information and this is not exactly what u have here , only the title is a bit more outstanding - even if not that much to be accurate, but more all the same - and the rest is sort of flat and having not much relief indeed , pls see next point
3- typo
this is an esetnail part ere and the bottom line is that u are far from standards and from the high expectation that envato turns out to have about this particular point since , what u have to offer at the moment is pretty flat , lacking globally variations, font combinations and touches of originality indeed …
4- spacing
this is once again a basic design principle and the fact of the matter is that much improvement is needed this far, u need to make sure that everything is properly arranged about it
5- positioning of the date
this looks like that u tried to place the date wherever u could, wherever u felt that there could have space for this , and even if u turned out to place in the impact zone, out of lack of contrast , failing typo so to speak, u lost the benefit of a positioning that could make sense and left the date kind of “cornered” with very little impact …
6- branding
i am not sure that u are realizing about this but currently u have no place at all to place the name of the club … which is much of a big mistake insofar as a potential buyer will e willing, and legitimate enough, to promote the place they are owning and where the event takes place so that the brand is remembered too
7- readability
needless to say that if u have a text and that this text is not readable there is almost no way to justify that this is here in the end … this is what u have with the “friday” word, which is not only of no help whatsoever and of very little use to say the least but which is bringing u additional troubles too … see next point …
8- alignment
u are violating the concerned basic design principle out of misplacing the word friday …, this is killing the harmony of the rest of what u have done as well as this is disturbing in terms of eye habits …
9- dodging
this is cool that u tree to bring a dodging into this flyer but if u end up change colors of the flyer and do not adapt the preview accordingly , this is rather bringing negative thing to the table rather than any other thing, making the composition look fake or unreal
10- depth
indeed, u have not really managed to install deth out here … bringing some game of shadow behind the model would help . the same shadowing is missing behind some of the texts as well if u ask me …
11- balance
the problem abt is the following … u have a central axis being way more crammed than the rest , the lower part of the flyer is less busy but still ok but the upper part is getting way less busy again and i would even qualify the upper right part of being very empty , to be honest , thus creating a misbalance between areas