hi buddy, i am sorry to say something like this but basically enough i do not see anything positive to say about the concerned logo … indeed, the concept is far being original - this is the bottom line - and not really purely adapted to the marketplace in a way , since there are details making the item look not good in small size. The problem being that here they judge logo templates in small size actually … There are also some major and visible execution mistakes when it comes to drawn shapes … (incompatible with the professional execution u are asked here). Some shapes look pretty uneven indeed and clearly appear as execution mistakes more than any other things and this is not done (so that u cannot expect anything else but rejection with such “lethal mistakes”) … Color combinations are not the best ones that u could have been thinking of and actually depending on theme color code, complementary colors and shade of the same color would have been a much safer choice indeed. The whole logo looks sort of distorted and in particularly the text part. Besides , about the typo is this is not matching super well with the with the illustration part to say the least and there is a lack of relief , variation, font combinations and a more problem-making issue of lack of originality to a higher extent again … There is not nothing really catching the attention or popping out, the whole logo looks too flat at the moment. Furthermore , the logo looks either misbalanced or not having the diverse elements being properly aligned indeed. Finally the mockup preview screenshots are contrasting really too much with the super flat more simple versions of the logo that are following which tend to decrease the attraction that some people may have felt with the item in the first place