Help! The track was again rejected, what is wrong with them?)

Greetings to colleagues. Just yesterday, my track was rejected. The quality, it seems to me, is quite good, but the track was not accepted, maybe the problem is in the arrangement, I don’t understand. Please help, I will be very grateful, I will accept any criticism.

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I think no idea, no pronounced melody

Understood thanks!

Hello!

Great job! I’m wearing closed-back headphones and still not getting a lot of lows from this, so it sounds very treble heavy from here. There’s a delayed clave in there that is hitting a screech frequency too. +1 to AtomSound’s comment, just add a lead with a recognizable theme, and answer it with a countering theme.

  • Nathan

Thanks for the tip, about the bass, I will consider)