Could you please give me some advice to get a better track? This is the fisrt track that I subbmited, and it got a hard rejection.
I’m open to hear everything.
Thank you in advance!
All instruments are the same character. In that particular case it looks like poore sound.
Transitions should be made more carefully. Silence gap at 0:44 sounds as a mistake. IMHO. Good luck!
I’ll add a little. You have problems with harmony. The instruments are playing incompatible chords. And the guitar is out of tune.
on 1:34 play sound is not clear please check that and then try it.
As mentioned above, synth and guitar are out of tune.
I also think so.
In addition to what has been written, you need to add a bass line, probably a syncopated one based on everything else you have going.