Rejected. Asking for feedback please...

Hi all, I’m new here, and new to this. I’ve been used to working with bands in the past, but this is a new fun project for me.

I got a hard rejection on this one, and would really appreciate some pointers. Please don’t hold back. My feelings won’t be hurt. I want to improve.

Cheers!

Hi Graham,

Have to be honest with you, your track sounds extremely chaotic. Like two separate tracks playing simultaneously.

Try to write the ideas you have in your head on paper first. The harmony, the melody. Then choose the instruments carefully and start creating the arrangement.

Good luck with your next submission!

Thanks for the advice @Soundset I’ll do that. The chaos is probably a reflection of the inside of my mind :joy: