Hi, I don’t understand why it was rejected.
Please have a listen and give me some feedback.
Appreciate you help!
You get a lot of problems here. First, the melody is way way too loud. It don’t blend. You need to work on the mix a lot (volume balance between instruments, better eq etc). Many samples sound too cheap (with samples repetitions among other things). This is like mid way between a MIDI file and a professionnal polished master. You have some crackles.
In a positive note, the vibe (chords, rhythm, melody) is good but you need more realism and production quality.
Hope it helps!
Thanks for taking time to listen and send your feedback!
I’ll try to improve next time.