Help on rejected track will highly apprecicated..

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#1

Hey there! This is my second track rejected,
“This submission does not meet our general commercial production (mixing/mastering/sample quality) standard, unfortunately.” Thisi is what I receive from envato and I’m a bit dissapointed.
Any friendly reviews will be higly appreciated. Thanks in advance


#2

Opppps, Now I noticed that in second part there is hard vibrato automation in the solo guitar (My bad)…Could it be the reason for hard rejection?


#3

First of all like your ideas and melody. Remember, all what i’m going to say is just my opinion. That glockenspiel (right?) at 2:10 was so painful, my monitors are bad at representing a high end but that was just too much.

Check it out “youtu(dot)be/1XNPJqQ_4NM”. You can do that with other EQs. Try to do that with some tracks that similar to yours.
Don’t forget you are mixing for people with cheap dynamics. They hear a lot of high freqs and not enough of low and mid, thats why most of the mixes here sounds really weird.

They like a songs with a lot of going on, some background rhythm instruments or loops will help you. Cause it’s sounds a bit empty. I thinks that’s it, maybe someone can say more.

Good luck with it! :wink:


#4

Yes, you’re right.In first place the forgotten excessive modultion automation of a solo guitar in second (loop part) and fo course as you said this glockenspiel is painful.May be my ears were too tired when i mixed it…Thank you for the useful criticism.
Best regards!