Hard Rejected in hip-hop music? Need feedback please

Unfortunately we found it isn’t at the quality standard required to move forward…Why did this happen?
https://soundcloud.com/u-s-l-a/a-hip-hop

Probably main chords are too loud and wide. Too “in your face” while drums are kinda quiet and in the backgound. Also, the track seems to be a little empty. I would add some additional samples and filter tricks to spice things up a little.

Anyways, it is a nice beat, but i think it needs to be balanced and developed a little more.

I think this music is not bad :wink:
just try to add something to arrangement and to change main chords, especially after 0:30…

I think is because the same chords sounds all the time. Change a little bit more, add some other movement, add something. But generally sounds very nice! Good luck!

I’d agree with @REYLLAND. The track is very cool and sounds great, but suffers by lacking some sort of established B section. I really hope you’re able to salvage this and use it again for something since it’s really well done. Good luck moving forward!