Unfortunately your submission


#1

Unfortunately your submission Light Hip-Hop isn’t ready for AudioJungle…

Friends, what is wrong in this track? My opinion it is ideal for AudioJungle!

https://soundcloud.com/lbbeats-1/zvsamzswataj


#2

it has nice ideas but the strings sound to fake, it is a bit slow and the mix could use some cleaning up. Hope that helps. Rejection hurts but usually the staff know what they are doing.


#3

If it is this the same version you submitted as the one on Soundcloud, the very start of it is badly cut. It begins right in with a nasty click. Might be one of the reason for the rejection.


#4

Drums are ok, not my style though, the sample quality and buildup are the real bottlenecks here, the track begins very sudden and (especially the string) samples sound bad. Not a fan of that lead sound that first comes in at 0:14. I like the vocal thing you did. Needs some bass, some aggressive sub bass or something. Good luck!


#5

thank you very much, I hope your advice will help me!))


#6

you are right, click there … Thank you for your attention.


#7

Thank you for vocals and drums!))) unexpectedness track is my idea. I try to fix the bass and serious