Hard Logo Rejected , Need Advice about logo

Give a advice about this logo because it rejected from graphic river.The graphic river send me this
“Thank you for your submission. We have completed our review of “Business Logo” and unfortunately we found it isn’t at the quality standard required to move forward, and you won’t be able to re-submit this item again.”
please give the advice

hi for me this looks rather nice and i tend to like what u have here but honestly there are things to take into account all the same. First of all, i recommend that u get rid of mistypings that are providing people with the feeling of a lack of professionalism, like the misspelling of “slogan” becoming “salogan” in your item. Otherwise , even if i like it like this personally , i guess that u could have a bit of a harmony between the illustration and text part indeed since the serif is not “purely matching” with the shapes that u have in the illustration. As for me , i tend to believe that u could have even more harmony and matching between both parts if they did not look disconnected color wise indeed. Why writing the name in black while u have shades of blue in the illustration and that u could have played with the concerned colors for the name and tagline too? For me the horizontal version is not completely well imbricated, also. Actually u should push the texts a bit on the left , push it more towards the illustration part. I would also recommend that u integrate more “mock up version” of your logo in the main preview file. Pls keep in mind that the preview is sort of an interface between u as an author and the other people, reviewer and potential buyers that u have to convince of the quality of what u have here. Otherwise , as a last thing i would say that maybe the logo is felt as being easily redone so that it loses a bit commercial potential so to speak … (not sure for this but maybe a small part of the explanation)

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