hi well, this is really generic a style that u have here, this is sort of clean but quite frankly the colors, arrangement and positioning, the global styles has been seen times and times again and definitely u need something to take your game to the next level and to make it more original. Not to mention that at this stage, u still have things to fix ad that the flyer is not perfect like this, which reduces the potentiality of your flyer to be approved indeed.
still about the global style, well, to be honest, there is not much graphic design in this item and thus this is easy to redo quickly and easily without having really humongous skills and photoshop proficiency. Why accepting a flyer not really bringing anything new and having a very limited commercial potential , then?
in addition, u did not really manage to handle the super shape that u have created as there are things to fix as regard to the positioning of element and balance concerning white space indeed
i recommend that u create a really professional fake logo that will give your item an additional touch of graphic design and improve the preview rather than flattening it even more, just like u have now
the typo part is definitely far from being criticism free as this is not only simple and rather flat , and lacking font variations, font combinations and touches of originality indeed. The fact of the matter is that the fonts u used are making what u have done look old or outdated and not really making the main picture match with the type of typo in the end …
besides it seems to me that the used font is not really matching the theme too
why having the same three icons and not making the most to introduce a small touch of graphic design by putting some worked out icons out there , especially as u have the same texts in all of them , which looks strange
most of the texts are not popping out much and hard to understand why titles and the slogan are not given more attention by adding decorations , bigger size and possible other things
i am also very concerned about the positioning of your text in the footer , is the flyer showed after taking out the tramline? if not i guess that if u are lucky enough, the texts must be out of the turmaline, but definitely not out of the safety zone, which is a problem , too